Intro & Bed

Ok, so here is the finished peice of the first two scenes for the film. The first is the intro and the second is the bedroom scene. i am really pleased with the outcome of both of these, i like the footage that i have obtained and also the way that it has been put together. My only problem is i am unsure whether the 5 - 8 second gap in the middle before the bed scene starts is relevant. I am looking at a way to maybe put this altogether.

INTRO & BED from Nicholas & Nick on Vimeo.